Chapter 1: The Old ManA Chapter by M.R SteinerHumanity is a ghost, another day another kill, strike from the sewage, grab and twist, throttle until dead. full book Finished in rough draft feedback appreciated, I just want to learn.Chapter 1: The Old Man6th drafts is the charm, complete rewrite. sample chapter of my full book. may be removed when edits are complete and I feel brave enough to send it for query. "Humanity
is a ghost. Another day another kill - strike from the sewage, grab and twist
then throttle until dead," I'd say it to myself each morning like a mantra
or a bad poem.
I talked to
myself often and always because there was no one else to hear. It was all I
could do to stop insanity. That phrase was a hard taught lesson learned in a
dank hell hole. I was alone and trapped under the ruins of existence. It was
home, hunting ground and prison.
My skills had
been honed through years of practice beneath layers of shimmering slime. I
crept through fallen tunnels stalking for Vermin, numb from the cold with
fingers stretched out all still as a statue. My body submerged right up to the
nose.
Sooner or
later they would forget I was there and come down from the roof, stirring the
silence with a click and a hiss as they moved in for a swim. They were nubile
little beasts with eight scurrying legs and 8 soulless eyes, almost impossible
to catch without a little bit of patience. This is where I learned to kill.
I'd shout the
important steps out as it happened.
"Strike."
My hands would dart like a viper. "Grab." The fingers would sink into
their fur. "Twist" I'd crack the spine in half. "Throttle."
By then it was time to eat.
I used those
words to remind myself not to panic. Since I first uttered the phrase my hunts
became less troublesome. A small note of joy would overtake me in those few
seconds as the adrenaline wore off. It served as a welcome distraction from
that purgatory. In honesty it made me happy to see the creatures squirm under
the pressure before those last panicked breathes. There was a time when I was
the prey, but not anymore.
My food had to
be cooked quickly down there; it was as though the air itself consumed them
leaving any flesh green and bloated within hours. For that I waded back to the
waist high water tunnel I called home.
"Another
day another kill," I said it every time on arrival so the pipes would know
I was back.
Over time I
had named each one based on the noises they made. Whistler was the smallest and
would squeal high pitched jets of steam, damn near choking me to death every
time. The second was Bertha who was a massive barrel shape that burned so hot
the alloy would burble. Then finally there was Mary who was split in two and
cried clean water.
It became a
bit of a lottery to see who would go first. With a still twitching kill in hand
I would wait intently day after day. The last time it was Mary who started
first with a wail and a shake. I had little time to wash myself and my clothes
before Bertha shone to life. The metal creaked and I left the water to rip the
vermin apart. Dead or not it was better than the green mould and mushrooms.
Their bright green blood would jet out no matter how hard I tried to stop it,
for the best results I used my hands to wrench its shell from the meat. While
the flesh sizzled on bertha's surface I had time to shower before Whistler began
to call out. My only way to shut him up was to slat my clothes over the top for
cleaning, a pair of ripped ancient leggings and a short sleeve shirt both dyed
black from the sewage.
With my hands
full of charred meat I would climb into my hammock strung high above the filth.
Still shivering I'd lie up there for hours, huddled for warmth as I read the first
torn page I’d ever found. By pure luck I stumbled across it on a coral
of corroded fat. It became the first part of my mantra, spoken many times in my
endless nights.
"Humanity
is a ghost."
Even that high
up there was no way to escape the damp. By morning the hammock would wring out a
chorus of droplets into the toxic bath below, foretelling my inevitable bound
back into the mix. I would put on my clothes and feel the liquid rise up to my
torso before wading back out.
And that cycle
was my life, the way it had always been until the water stopped flowing.
I thought
perhaps I'd stayed in the tunnels too long or that I may have just lost track
of time. On the second day I really started to worry because I waited and
nothing happened. Not one jet of steam or twist of the barrel and most
importantly, no water. Slowly the sewage level begun to seep downward until at all
but a carpet of festered sludge was left. For the first time in memory the
walls had run dry. Even the mushrooms became a hard grit in my fingers the
moment they were picked. It served to herald that final event which forced me
past the familiar and out into that horrible unknown.
Some days I
questioned my sanity. Time in isolation had left me paranoid and open to
flights of imagination. Sometimes a call would echo through the tunnels, like
an animal desperately looking for something, perhaps a fresh kill. I had never
dared seek them and never would have until that night.
I heard the
dull murmur of a roar; it tore me from slumber and froze me in fear. In those
hazy moments I believed the stuff of my waking nightmares was right underneath
me. Cautiously I grasped the edge of my hammock and peered over the side to see
what it was. Vermin flowed like tide. A thousand tiny calls propagated into one
booming shriek as they migrated in the hundreds, set for places unknown. It left
me no other choice. In a single bound I ripped down the hammock to wrap up my
belongings and gave chase to border of home.
The spot was
called Rickety Bridge, a juvenile name given on my first week of arrival. In
reality that collection of twisted rubble was anything but its namesake. It
stretched over a void separated by a clear gap that blasted gusts of wind as I
looked over the edge. On viewing my footing shifted and my stomach shrank, one
wrong move and death was certain. It was a problem the Vermin didn't seem to
share. They were already halfway across almost unaffected by gravity itself.
Starvation was the only other option. My muscles tensed, I knelt on the ground and for a second I considered turning back, but my body didn't seem to listen. In a spray of sludge I dashed towards the jump and took off from the very edge to reach out a pillar of stone. Still in mid-air I clutched to it and screamed. Helpless to do anything but watch the hammock's knot unfurl, casting what little I had into the deep.
Out of the
blue my lips started to move with prayers to the deities from the torn pages,
those poor souls who plummeted inside the hammock into oblivion. It felt like
the words weren't for me but for them. Something inside knew that without those
stacks of paper they would no longer exist. I treated it as a sacrifice which
gave the strength to push on. Carefully I squeezed through cracks of concrete
and grazed my skin upon the coarse surface. It forced me to slow in pace and
hold in each breath, exhaled for minutes at a time as I inched vertically to
the built up remains on high.
"This is
amazing," I said as I rested for air.
What greeted
me were ruins of a corridor barely supported by rubble. The whole place served
as a sort of time capsule to house many fossils of the past. Signs with crudely
drawn men and frames of old furniture dotted every darkened corner. I walked
distracted when my boot hit something round and hollow which rolled off and
smashed against the wall. More of the same stared back at me from the dark,
dozens of skulls. I wasn't frightened because if anything they confirmed my
suspicions. Everyone else was dead and I was the only one left, a girl at the
bottom of earth, it hit me just as events took a turn for the worst.
The floor
shook and the roof crumbled. Whether it was my weight or the Vermin's crossing
Rickety Bridge had begun to fall. A sound of collapse chased me down the hall;
section by section the stone cracked underfoot pressing my haste towards a
final obstacle, one last jump across the void. There wasn't time to think. I
leaped into the unknown and dropped like a rock, narrowly catching a ledge.
Winded on impact with barely a gasp I clawed to safety. It was all too close.
I was trapped
in a place I had never been brave enough to set foot. Rickety Bridge served as
a barrier to protect me from the creatures beyond, without that gulf between us
I truly felt endangered. I quietly crept in fear and saw the same fallen grey
brick as back home, yet after a while when I turned last corner no thought in
imagination compared. It made itself plain in scale, impossibly large towers of
concrete made bright by orange fixtures. It was still a sewer but the filth ran
as waterfalls from one perch to the next. Mass reservoirs for whatever stood
above.
Vermin
shrieked through the rushing water, drawing me to a walkway where the falls
mist hid them from view. The spray only grew thicker as I followed becoming a
rain of salty sludge which covered my vision in a thin film. I didn't notice
him stood right in front of me. He was quiet. By the time my sight returned it
was impossible to run. His mere image froze me with fear, stood on two legs,
his body like a wolf with wetted grey fur and beady red eyes.
Its mouth
opened and an end seemed certain.
"Human…"
Its jaws did not move but words called forth like a whisper. "You are the
one we wait for." He tackled me to the ground and clutched my arms with
claw-like hands. "You are our way to paradise."
"And you
thought they were a myth," said a voice out of view, almost female in
tone, "hold it down, our mute friend will conduct the procedure,"
A third set of
footsteps churned towards me like a set of gears. All I saw was his arm, a
steely limb with a blade at the end. It span like a saw, my one choice was to
watch. Helpless as it drew closer, burning hot right next to my eyes. Then a
flash, I knew true pain. They cut through my face, peeled back the skin and
plucked each eye away.
"Cut out
her tongue!" he said over my screams.
"No time,
payment is for the eyes so leave the rest, or do you want to stay here for
Reclamation?"
"Forgive
me Founder."
They left me
there to die. I tasted nothing but blood and saw naught but a dark void, one
that burned against the raw cut flesh. As I twisted in agony my voice attracted
a familiar noise. They squeaked and clicked emboldened by the pain. First one
gnawed at my hand while the rest were too skittish to join. It forced to me
stand and blindly sweep my legs, an act that only provoked them.
What few
senses remained were all pushed beyond limit as I stumbled with arms
outstretched. Desperately I sought the crash of the waterfalls in the hopes
they would throw off my pursuers. Though the absolute night my hands shredded
against the bars for support, injuries barely noticed when I rushed back into
the spray. It washed into my wounds as if someone poured acid becoming a deep
pain that brought me to the floor as the Vermin gathered for the kill. Being
devoured by the animals I hunted seemed fitting; they hissed then slowed to a
crawl, leaving just one option. I jumped over the side and plunged into the
unknown.
I persevered
beneath a running tide that pulled me right to the bottom. The air exploded in
my skull whilst every fibre of muscle kicked to the surface where I swayed
amongst the rapids, wracking me upon a solid steel grate. My last ounce of
strength was used to climb out of that mess, just as the adrenaline wore off
and unconsciousness found me soon after.
I awoke some
time later, still in pain with the scent of infection on my wounds; the last
thing I expected to hear was a voice.
"Impossible,
you're human," he said.
I could barely
hear him over the sound of my own heartbeat, nor could I speak in anything but
a whisper.
"Just
finish it quickly…," I said.
His feet
trudged closer next to my head where he grasped my face and turned it towards
him. His skin was cold to the touch.
"I assure
you girl no harm is intended, I was looking for salvage, never expected to find
anything like you. Who did this?"
"I don't
know..." If it were still possible I would have shed tears.
"I can
help you; the only other option is to wait here for death so what is your
decision?"
"Who are
you?"
"Just an
Old Man, do you accept my offer?"
They were
words I could not trust. The reason why was carved on my very face. There was
no doubt in my mind that he planned to cut me up like the rest. Yet with an
audible gasp of anguish I nodded in agreement. Against every remaining sense I
trusted this Old Man who just happened to have walked by.
His freezing
cold hands clasped around my ankles and pulled me away through the grime. At
that point it seemed like a quicker end. Only then it struck me that I was
trading time for pain. If he truly meant to cut me up like the rest that last
hour of life could have been excruciating. I tried to kick free but my body was
just too weak. Whatever he planned was going to happen no matter what.
For hours my
head dragged against a series of stones and metal; the Old Man didn't say a
word until the very end.
"Almost
there, we just have to cross the bridge; my home is on the other side."
For a moment I
passed out and awoke upon a cold metal surface where machinery hummed in the
background, occasionally drowned out by the sharpening of tools which only
confirmed my suspicions.
"We need
to cut out the infection before it goes any further so please don't move. This
will be essential if we want you to see again."
It was
obviously some sort of trick. A ploy to get me to sit still, either way it
didn't matter; I just went along with it. Death was inevitable.
"What do
you mean see again, who are you?"
"I'm an
engineer of sorts, one who works with biological and mechanical applications.
I'd like to ask one thing before we begin, what is your name?"
I hesitated
until he injected something into my arm, a drug which washed through my veins
like a warm bath.
"My name
is March…,"
"The
month of Mars how poetic, now March your face should be numbed by the
anaesthetic and your other senses should have diminished on the left side,
let's begin."
Even if it was
a trick and death was about to follow I was thankful he'd left me numb for it.
In that semi-conscious state, a sense of acceptance came over me. I was
prepared for the end.
"What
attacked you?"
I saw no
reason to hide the truth anymore.
"One was
like an animal, some sort of wolf man."
"A
Tragen, the closest thing to natural life these days except for you of course,
so it was a pack of them?"
The medicine
had left me half deaf and moving in recoil as the rotten flesh was chiselled
away. All the while I tried my best not to throw up at the dulled sensation of
having his fingers inside my skull.
"I didn't
see much of the second but his arm was made out of steel."
"That
could have been any number of mechanical life form. It's strange because the
Tragen stand against all technology, I wonder what could have made them work
together?"
"Who
cares what made them friends, why did they do this to me?"
"Because
you're human obviously, in this age you are almost a myth to those in the lower
circle and human organs fetch quite a price, something they no doubt required
to escape this place."
"I think
they both took orders from the third one, she stayed out of view. Someone
called Founder."
His hand's
stopped when I spoke the name.
"Impossible
the Founder is gone; those fools are following a liar,"
My answers
sent him silent for the duration, right until he announced the visor had been
attached.
"There
was a price for this March, one you will notice the moment I engage your
implant."
I saw a
flicker of something thought lost as a billion sparks birthed colours of red,
green and blue to reveal an image of my saviour's face. He apologised for the
low resolution which made him appear like a mosaic pattern, but it was still
easy see, white wrinkled skin covered in cables all bundled around a visor in
place of eyes.
"As you
can now see I have a little experience with being vision impaired myself. Maybe
you realise why I wanted to help now?"
Then I noticed
my left ear was still deaf. I touched the side and felt nothing but the display
grafted in its stead.
"Yes,
that's why I stayed on your right; I needed some material to reconstruct those
new retinas, the ear was an acceptable match,"
He had traded
one sense for half another. Nevertheless I was almost ecstatic as I looked
around the room, a rust metal shack with a mirror in the corner. My implant was
like his but more minimal in design. A sort of visor spread from one eye to the
next with two cameras beneath all fixed through the earpiece. Only then did the
pain return. It felt like a knife in my skull, collapsing me to the floor where
I almost blacked out. I barely heard another word until he injected me a second
a time.
"The
price of being human I am afraid. That procedure was designed for my kind not a
living breathing human. We will have to keep you medicated otherwise the pain
could be lethal."
"Just what
the hell are you?"
"I told
you, I'm an Old Man."
His direct
almost emotionless attitude was off-putting at first. The moment I stood up he
insisted I head right upstairs, the reason being my recovery would interrupt
his work. The ordeal had left me too tired for questions. When he showed me the
ladders I climbed up to the second floor without argument, an almost empty
space with some sheets in the centre. Compared to the hammock it was heaven. I
collapsed right onto it where in tandem with the drugs my body fell still,
rocked to sleep by toxicity.
As the time
passed I realised the Old Man was anything but human. Not once did he sleep. He
just worked from one contraption to the next. Sometimes he would head out and
return hours later with arms full of scrap to use for his numerous projects. No
matter how many times I asked he never explained what they did. It seemed
conversation was not his strong suit, apart from when it was time for me to
eat, a quirk questioned on my 5th day.
His forehead
twitched with the slightest frown, his gaze drawn to the silver ration packet
as I took a bite. His mouth seemed to move along with it.
"I do
miss eating," he said.
"When was
the last time you ate?" I asked.
"Long
ago, I was a different person back then, we all were."
He went quiet
for a moment as I ate another piece, like he was trying to relive the memory by
action.
"What
does it taste like?"
"Kind of
gritty like dry mushrooms and mould, I've rarely had anything other than that
unless you count the Vermin."
"You eat
Vermin?"
"They
weren't so bad, I knew how to catch one, don't ever try to take on a gang of
them."
"Vermin
as you call them don't give me any bother."
"Is that
because you're not human anymore?"
My last
question must have struck a nerve because that was the last time we talked
until the 6th Morning.
He ignored me
the second I climbed down the ladder, his attention focused on work. When I
asked for the pain killers he just sprung up from his chair and attempted to
walk right out the door. I rushed between him and threshold, my arms lifted as
a barrier until he told me exactly what was wrong. It turned out the drugs were
running short. There was only enough left for a week so we needed a fresh
supply, for which there was a single location. He showed me an image of a
settlement which looked like a castle built from trash, either way it served as
a seat of power for the Tragen.
I backed away
the moment he mentioned the name, overcome by that memory of the attack.
"You want
me to go in there after everything they did?"
"There is
no other way, fear not, we can alter your appearance to look less… alive. That
heartbeat is going to have to be slowed and it's a simple matter to change your
skin tone. Although I can assure you the Tragen will hate my kind almost as
much as they covet yours. But it will work if they're given proper
tribute."
His indelicate
words gave little reassurance. The idea of being among them still terrified me.
Regardless of fear the Old Man spoke the truth, there was no other choice.
Deities help me I agreed.
The Tragen as
he called them lived a tribal like existence and their laws required something
extraordinary to overlook distrust, which was to be a finger from my right
hand. People cutting me up had become a regular fact of life. It was a thought
which left me numb even before he injected me and sawed off the smallest digit.
He placed it inside a clear container called a preservation jar where it
floated in the centre becoming a morbid sight that left me distracted.
I didn't
expect to see my hand transition to a bleached white colouration, only then did
I notice the second needle stuck out of my skin.
"Is this
permanent?"
"It's
only one half of the Van Haugen conversion so it's entirely reversible, the
Tragen shouldn't suspect a thing. To them you will be a grovelling Ersat like
me."
A sound of
rolling metal outside diverted my questions. When we walked out the shack I saw
an odd craft in the water shaped like a cylinder on its side, with tracks all
around and an open ramp at the front.
"I used
this to get around a while ago. No one questions a garbage scow, everything you
need is inside."
The ramp
pulled closed the minute I walked on. Within there was nothing but a panel on
the wall and a half-zipped bag on the floor. What I expected to find inside
were weapons perhaps a flashlight, instead I pulled out a set of black boots
and a large hooded cloak. In anger I sat cursing the Old Man's name, bitter
he'd left me nothing to defend myself when a high pitched shriek erupted from
my earpiece.
"Can you
hear me? I have a clear image through your visor."
"You can
see though my implant?"
"I can
also hear so long as the connection is strong enough."
He was in my
head and It meant nothing to him, I should have been outraged. My main concern
should have been to make him break that connection. Alas the engine on the
craft shuddered to life and the journey commenced, it became a necessary evil
to survive the mission.
"You said
I look Ersat now so just what the hell does that mean and why couldn't you give
me a longer battery life?"
"It was
the best I could do so be thankful it will last two days; mine works for eight
hours. As for the term Ersat, well it’s a label my kind appropriated, once an
insult repurposed to show pride. It is difficult to explain in full just know
we were once like you but not anymore and the Tragen hate us for it. Now put on
the cloak and pull up your hood, try to keep covered."
He never told
me about seeing through my implant. Once more I was thrown back into
uncertainty. How many other things he lied about and what his real intentions
were became a mystery. I blamed myself for trusting him. It was a stupid move
and in all likelihood would have seen me better off in the gutter. For hours
the vehicle rocked back and forth whilst I sat uncomfortable and anxious,
torturing myself with mental images of those monsters ripping me to shreds when
at last that moment had come.
The door
opened up and for a moment I believed my visor had broken, for nothing but a
single light was visible. Beyond the vehicle all was quiet save for a cutting
wind to enforce the sheer size of my surroundings.
"Where do
I go?"
"Follow the
path March."
His words
didn't make sense until a stream of light shot out my display. Somehow he'd
projected a trail that guided me but gave little comfort from the shadows.
Snarls and roars had begun to call out. Their blurs rushed past me, the slightest
pull of their momentum knocked me over. I was lucky to be alive by the time the
gates came into view.
It was bigger
than expected. What I thought to be a castle was a stack of toppled tower
buildings deep inside a crater all completely surrounded by massive scrap
walls. There outside the gates was a crowd of Tragen, gathered as a menagerie
of every size and shape. Strangely they were all covered in the same manner of
cloak as me.
Before them
stood one of their kin who blocked the path, twice the height of the others. He
spoke unlike the previous Tragen I saw, his lips moved while the one who
attacked me kept his mouth still.
"We will
take warriors of fighting age only, if you cannot fight you must move on!"
cried out the beast.
"You have
to speak up before they close the gates March," said the Old Man.
I begrudgingly
followed his advice and cautiously crept forward to announce myself.
"What
about tribute?"
The second I
spoke that Tragen stepped in front of my face; he was like a boar, eyes yellow
with protruded tusks.
"And what
would an Ersat, especially a damaged one have to make such an audience
worthy?"
Clouds of
breath made me choke as I pulled out the jar. Its mere existence made them step
back in disbelief.
"This is
my tribute, a relic, a human finger if I'm not mistaken."
"Be
thankful you know enough of our traditions to survive Ersat for our Matriarch
must accept all tributes, even from monsters like you. Let the Pale-Skin
through!" All had become
quiet. Their hatred burned into my back and I could do nothing but walk away.
My pace turned to a sprint as one howled while the rest followed in suit. Each
ripped off their robes, exposing what true forms dwelt underneath, mammals,
insects, birds, some were all three combined. Twisted monsters turned feral at
the mere sight of my passing. Were it not for the closing gate they would have
killed me right then and there.
Beyond those
walls the crater stretched for miles, looking like a giant version of Rickety
Bridge. Every building stuck out from the centre as though a massive explosion
had once taken place. Between them were clusters of Tragen, each moved over one
another in the distance, their calls clear. It left me too scared to move. I
stood entrapped by terror as the glowing trail vanished and nothing but static
hummed through my earpiece.
The Old Man's
voice was gone and I was alone in a city of monsters.
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