....stop f*****g asking me define my work

....stop f*****g asking me define my work

A Poem by brianna vega

nothing no no no nothing
enough is enough for the time being your simply just draining me
enough is enough for the time being your simply just draining me
and im here suckling at another abandoned drink
that only i can afford with change from yesterday
enough is enough and im simply done
done done

© 2011 brianna vega


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hmmm..in my face..good but too short for My liking..make your point..with more than just ejaculations of //NO?. you have the ability to express it ..use it..read My friend 'Selene -aka'..

Posted 13 Years Ago



It doesn't matter, what we, think, it matters to each reader what it means to them doesn't it.

and im here suckling at another abandoned drink
that only i can afford with change from yesterday

If i had to define this, i would define it as real, raw, and good.

Nicely done
Antonio


Posted 13 Years Ago


has a very stream-of-thought mingled with a mean drunk feel to it. I like it. (even the "your")

Posted 13 Years Ago




How to say no.
Done perfectly.
---- Eagle Cruagh

Posted 13 Years Ago


That is all..

Posted 13 Years Ago



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brianna vega
brianna vega

city of lost angels, CA



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