your eyes say it all

your eyes say it all

A Poem by brianna vega

you twist my words into an enemy of mine
its coming to the point where i may be afraid to speak at all
jealous boys they never do
a social butterfly i must fly
im not looking for anything other then you
but with a sigh
i submit to your fight
accusing tones
and double looks
with eyes of graves and hands like hooks
i love you so
oh to the end
yet that doesnt mean we may not part my friend
trust me once oh trust me now
for the slightest doubt will tear us down
though you do not state
i know its so
for your eyes they glitter withsomething like hate
mistrust it is
and he is then
but the more he feeds the bigger he gets

© 2011 brianna vega


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Very good character analysis.
Very good writing
Excellent portrayal
---- Eagle Cruagh

Posted 13 Years Ago



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