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A Poem by brianna vega

im so sick of the world today
we lost the authenticy of real life
conversations over the web
do you even hear my voice in your head?
did you hear the tone of my voice in the words i just said
life on screens so artificial to mee
can you see the smile on my lips
these photographs arent enough
your not a real friend
if i havent seen you yet
every time you press like
i wonder what you really think
life on screens so artificial to mee
every time you dont reply
i wonder what you really think
when we say whats up hows your day
& we say its ok
dont you ever wonder whats really at play
life on screens so artificiall to mee
but its the only way to talk to some people now days
were all too busy to go and meet
but we manage to log on all day
sending texts comments messages
i wish youd just stop by
even if its just to say good by
artifical friendships
i dont know who you really are
life on screens so artificial to mee

© 2010 brianna vega


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. your words are powerful ... it's sad that some of us don't value the power of improving technology ... but it's good that some of us do ... i get overwhelmed all the time with the amazing interaction i have with poets in the cafe ... i live miles away in india ... and yet distances are always reducing ...

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brianna vega

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