see me.

see me.

A Poem by brianna vega

Many times i feel like a failure as a poet
  many a times i sign in and check my views
they often override the comments i receive
  it makes me feel as if my words caught no attention
they are not worth a comment
         critics please abuse me with your words
its better than knowing im not even worth your time
                  the hated are more famous than i.
and id rather be hated than invisible.

© 2010 brianna vega


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Kinda hard to be invisible when someone notices you, sorry. You are no failure as a poet. A poet's first and foremost duty is to capture the world around them, experiences, objects, places, feelings, everything, with words and portray them. We have traded lines with each other before, and I can honestly say that the way you write is beautiful, even in this poem. Keep your chin up, it takes time for our art to gain recognition, and sometimes it's not even gained in our lifetime. However, if but one person reads your words and only a line stays with them, haunting the hallways of their mind and affecting their lives, you have been an artistic success.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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brianna vega
brianna vega

city of lost angels, CA



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