im f*****g uppp.

im f*****g uppp.

A Poem by brianna vega

its nights like this

when i look in the mirror

regreting past decisions and i realize i wish it was always like this

i cant keep my self in line

i cant make my self put time into things i wanna try

im always out putting my life on the line

i have no self discipline

and its destroying my life

im making bad decisions and i  dont know

if i will ever be able to make those dreams come alive.

© 2008 brianna vega


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Great poem. It's difficult to attempt to succeed at something that you heart really isn't into. I can relate & I think you captured the emotion and frustration of failure very well in this poem. :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


i can relate. wow! ur name is really Brianna? mine too


Posted 16 Years Ago


A declaration of honesty that starts with a look in the mirror. You captured the frustrating struggle with self very well.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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