my search for a self

my search for a self

A Poem by brianna vega

She wants to find the words to throw out her insecurities

She wants to find the heart to fend off all her pain

she wants to find the reason why all her thoughts wont go away

She stares in the mirror wondering how it came to be his way

No matter how many different ways she tried to put it

the story cant seem to leave her head

She screams out in pain

But she cant hear herself

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is my life a lost cause

 

 

© 2008 brianna vega


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lost without an echo... its a very good write!

Posted 16 Years Ago


And here i thought you were complaning about the upstairs neighbors running the vacume in the middle of the night! :) I thought that this was very profound. The voice that is the inner us, seems to want to scream all of our issues out, so that our head will be silent for a time. I like it. It works. Yet in the end we just can't get rid of the memories, happy or sad. Perhaps they are all learning lessons, and we just haven't figure out what we are supposed to learn. Like why the dryer keeps eating the socks? I still haven't figured that one out! :)
Great writing!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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