Hail nature!

As poets we all love nature and the elements, go green and preserve

In water's waves
Fire's flames
Air's gusty wind.
Earth's dust
tree leaves
icy chilly feel.

In whis-per-ings
Shiny things
Green grass that sways.
Starring skies
Luna eyes
Even sunny rays.

Nature speaks through all of these,
So lend a listening ear.
And let grow, until there's more
So we may still be here.

Reviews

[John the Baptist]

I think we do need to listen more to nature, what with the increasing number of natural disasters that are affecting the planet negatively. You picture nature's beauties very nicely. I just hope we don't ruin them.

[Blue]

Simple and wise. Always a pleasure to read your works, Costa.

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Nicely constructed, Costa.

Nature and the elements, along with emotions, are the poets truest ally.

A very nice, softly flowing write.

[costa siwale]

Thanks a lot for your review. much appreciated friend

[Satoshi IroTzu]

Respect, Costa Siwale

I find this poem to be a masterpiece. Your flow is fluent, words represent the nature well and the message if of the vital importance for the human race.

Enjoy your life!

[costa siwale]

Thank you for taking time to give your review, very much appreciated Tzu.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thats so touching!
It's like a soulful music being lend to the ears
Lovely Piece!
Keep up the good work!

[costa siwale]

Thanks a million Pragati, grateful for the time taken to read.

[Great Aunt Astri]

What a brilliant poem. You have used all the elements in the first verse and I love the hyphenated WHIS-PER-INGS .... its just like whisper. Clever you.

[costa siwale]

thank you soo much

[Great Aunt Astri]

Very evocative describing words. You are quite right, Nature will still be here, even if we all go. But my fear is that, what with pollution and all the destruction, poor Nature might expire! Well written poem.

[costa siwale]

indeed pollution and destruction threatened the globe we live in, how unfortunate that we scar the very sphere that sustains us.Thank you for reading.

[Great Aunt Astri]

BRAVO what a lovely poem! It has a lot of emotive power. Well done

[Lonely Shadow]

Lovely imagery, and your personification makes me feel as if these things are tangible.

[costa siwale]

thank you for taking the time to read Lonely Shadow..its a pleasure

[Drama Child]

Great piece of writing! Nice imagery, and I love the final stanza!

[costa siwale]

thank you again, am so humbled