Inside Of Blue

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Just turned around…

gonna go look at the ocean.

I am letting the music play on

amazed I can listen so strong.

ego does not have to let go of its pain

but I intend to melt away in its rain

singing, singing huuu

 

Sand tingles and crunches underneath,

surf pounds crashing relief.

so I walk in this morning

with clouds playing delicate tendril

collage just above

listening, listening with You

 

Breathing in, surrendering …

pausing in my long get away.

I hear myself saying, "I have to..."

keep coming here now

keep thirstily drinking all of You

keep shining sun bright

inside, inside of blue

Reviews

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I liked this alot! It captured a beautiful scene by the ocean's refreshing waters, as well as hinted to that of standing by and being rejuvinated by love.
I think my favorite lines were "Sand tingles and crunches underneath,
surf pounds crashing relief."
You have a wonderful way of expressing your feelings!
Keep up the wonderful work!
Welcome to the WC!