I'd Swim

I’d swim to the
furthest point out water
to silence, stillness.
Where every wave rose like
a grassy hill
and you could see the blue
curving horizon.  

Reviews

[Alicia Huntley]

Lovely imagery! Sometimes the fewest words are the best.

[Tina Louise UK]

Such a beautiful tranquil read...really enjoyed :) x

[CosminDZS]

My work here is done, thank you Tia

[Hunter Rose]

I like it! :) It's simplicity makes it pure and flawless.

[CosminDZS]

I wouldn't say flawless but I am humbled by your comments

[Madalyn Beck]

This paints a beautiful picture! Short and sweet.

[CosminDZS]

A little too short for my tastes, but thank you Madalyn

[Scott Metro]

Simple and pointed...


Nice.
Scott

[CosminDZS]

Atleast it's not cryptic, heh

[Scott Metro]

LOL...true enough...
S.

[Sami Khalil]

There is determination and vision in this great write. Wanting to swim to the furthest...Bravo................

[CosminDZS]

Even further than that Sami, much thanks

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Good to know...You are welcome...:)...................

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem. I suicide the big storms of the Winter from 1992-1994 on the Monterey coastline. I love being alone with the sea and becoming one with her. I tell people. Respect the sea and it won't hurt you. Good visions create by the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[CosminDZS]

You can truly find peace out in the water Coyote, thank you