Amazing, it's fair to say I was totally indulged in this piece. I've actually read it over a few times and I can't pin down exactly what it is that I enjoy so much about it- probably the fact that there's nothing to not enjoy.
Brilliant write!
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you for taking the time to write such a thoughtful response!
A beautiful poem for your dream journal. I like the places you took me to and the thoughts create by the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Oh wow, this is lovely. For me it doesn't create an image in my mind, it kind of creates a blank canvas in my mind of black with stars zooming by and it works very well with this piece, I love it! c:
Lovely little piece, it had a sort of musical element to it. Felt like it could really suit having music along with it!
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Heh I guess you're right, it does have a musical tone to it. Maybe I was humming a tune along with i.. read moreHeh I guess you're right, it does have a musical tone to it. Maybe I was humming a tune along with it, who knows, and I thought I had no musical talent heh. Just don't ask me to sing it for you...
Couldn't you put it in both places ?
Very nice...seems a bit of a change up for you.
Enjoyed it.
Scott
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Unfortunately, the thing with pretentious literary magazines is that most only accept work that has .. read moreUnfortunately, the thing with pretentious literary magazines is that most only accept work that has not been "previously published". Which also includes anything posted on the internet! How does this piece seem different to you, Scott?
Seems less cryptic...a little more earthbound ..less thinking involved to digest.
That's just .. read moreSeems less cryptic...a little more earthbound ..less thinking involved to digest.
That's just my thoughts.....
10 Years Ago
I would agree with you on that point, I guess I'm a little cryptic sometimes. Although it seems so c.. read moreI would agree with you on that point, I guess I'm a little cryptic sometimes. Although it seems so clear when I spill it on the page. Thanks for the insight Scott, one of the few Ive received.