Nasty Old Sun

I'm a cynic sometimes

I hold the sun in a bad light
a mean old tyrant in the sky
always watching, waiting,
and stretching its rays
into every place for
everything's been done
under the sun
they say
even beneath
this dirty old ground
lies some nasty old sun
who comes out and basks
in the light of the elder one

Author's Note

I don't actually always believe everything I write about

Reviews

[CoraZanini]

well,someone finally put the sun the sun down:)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Glad you qualified your belief as I love the sun. However my take on this is a description of the power of nature around us, the sun in the first part of the verse and volcanic activity in the latter and all the while many humans carry on the harm and atrocities?

[CosminDZS]

I think the sun gets too many compliments and I felt it was about time somebody said something negative about. You're take is pretty much on the dot.