dust.

dust.

A Poem by Britanie

wordless lust
breath smells of old musk
sickening,
black and burrowing
burning through a hole
that used to be a heart.
fragments
segmenting
into scrapbooks
with
blank pages
black edges
memories like
pieces of dust.

© 2009 Britanie


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Here a few words speak volumnes.
As Katy indicated, the last four
lines are fabulous. Love it.
A terrific poem , excellent writing,
a splendid talent at work.
Thank You,
-----Eagle Cruagh

Posted 13 Years Ago


Loved this one, i really enjoyed the last 4 lines. Wonderful write!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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