strong feelings

strong feelings

A Poem by two sides of the same person

my feelings for

you are so strong

they have lasted

for years and

never left

completely just

lost but now

i have found

them again

and i dont

plan on

losing them

this time

no matter

what i will

always have my

feelings for you

they are

that strong

© 2008 two sides of the same person


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Wow, such true emotions. Great write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This has lots of potential to go somewhere, and it leaves me questioning, what caused the lapse in memory for the feelings, how did they come back, blah blah. I'd elaborate into this piece if I were you, it can go good places.

Posted 12 Years Ago


i like it...it shows your true emotions for this person

Posted 13 Years Ago


You should just stalk the person. It's fun, creepy, and gives you purpose in life.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on December 18, 2008

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two sides of the same person
two sides of the same person

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im corey im 16 years old and i am a complicated guy if you want to find out how lets get to know each other more..

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