how the light vanished

how the light vanished

A Poem by two sides of the same person

teh light was

in my heart and

in my body

i left you

behind and it

vanished from me

i wasnt sure

it would ever

come back

for without

seeing you or

talking to you

the light slowly

started to vanish

from me

i knew leaving

would hurt but

i never thought

my light would

be covered up

by the darkness

of being alone

and angry without

me being around

you i started

to let the darkness

enter and i let

the light vanish

© 2008 two sides of the same person


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"the light was in my heart and in my body i left you behind and it vanished from me"..i like this part..this has potential! place punctuations so the poem would flow beautifully..:)



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two sides of the same person
two sides of the same person

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im corey im 16 years old and i am a complicated guy if you want to find out how lets get to know each other more..

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