saddness

saddness is what I feel

without you my smileing has stopped

I can tell your sad too even

if were not together I can tell

your at least a little sad without me

even if you don't want to show it

I know im sad without you

I know you must at least be a little sad without me

Reviews

[Just Cat]

Your poems really make sense to me, 'pain', 'sadness' and 'the demon in me' especially. Like me, emotion and passion are evident in ur poems.