A Love like Yours

"a love like him" _Deepeye 1999_

A love like yours,

as warm as the sun.

A love like yours,

as gentle as the wind.

A love like yours,

as deep as the ocean.

A love like yours,

As ever-flowing like a river.

A love like yours,

as white as the snow.

A love like yours,

as sweet as the honeysuckle.

A love like yours,

that blossoms like a tulip.

A love like yours,

Is far beyond compare.

A love like yours,

Is the love I ever wanted,

A love like yours,

is nothing more . . . nothing less.

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

I like the way you compare love to so many beautiful things, like honey suckle, like a tulip, etc... What you are showing us is that this love of yours is perfect, nothing more nothing less....a beautiful notion...as you desire...
I like the repetition as well.
Best
B.

[cor.empire]

Dear Betty,
Thanks for dropping by and for your appreciation!
You're awesome!

cor.empire,

[Betty Hermelee]

You’re very welcome!

[Chris Shaw]

First love is all this and so much more.I like how you have entwined your lines with nature. That works very well for me. Visually expressed.

Chris

[cor.empire]

Dear Chris.
Thank you for dropping by and for your sweet and lovely review!

[Chris Shaw]

My pleasure :)