This Caynon

This Caynon

A Poem by coperniki
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A song a wrote, rather quickly it just seemed to flow. Need to post multiple places so I dont lose it. Maybe I should invest in paper and pen. It probably flows better with the guitar.

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Verse 1:
This hole needs something to satisfy
The caynon parched, or so it's dry
Go to the forest, deep outside
Fill the pail, start your ride
The closer you get, the harder you try
The more it hurts, the more you die
The crows are pecking, at your eyes
Now you're blind, since arrived

chorus:
this time you've taken all of my, concentration
and left me empty deep inside
this hole
that's consecrated

Verse 2:
This was my inquiry
Testing these waters
This caynon's not for me
Needing it hotter
So I get relief
Praying to God, Calling to Rah
Source of the sun, seems to be gone
The birds and snakes, come out to play
This place it seems, I will stay

chorus:
this time you've taken all of my, concentration
and left me empty deep inside
this hole
That's consecrated

Bridge:
Take that 12th step, to the ledge
Don't let it be remembered, Don't let it be fed
The shadow may grow in the dark, try to linger, but it will starve
Now turn around, go back to bed, this caynon is left, for the dead
The sun is coming, I can feel, the heat it has, must be real
But as I leave, I must say, the wound I have, sticks like clay

chorus:
this time you've taken all of my, concentration
and left me empty deep inside
this hole
That's consecrated

© 2018 coperniki


Author's Note

coperniki
grammar issues will be fixed sometime. this is a rough draft, its late

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Added on June 22, 2018
Last Updated on June 22, 2018
Tags: caynon, hole, addiction, drugs, water

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coperniki
coperniki

bryan, OH



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I play guitar, started writing again. Thought I'd post for feedback and just to share whats in my head. more..