The devil in my mind

The devil is in my mind

Should I let him out?

So that I can be free, of the devil that torments me

But then he would be loose, free to attack and pray on

Anyone in his way

I don’t want to be responsible for the aftermath

The screaming of a million souls the smell of madness in the air

Hell on earth

 

So do you see, it is me

That endures the pain and the madness so you can all be free

It is me that keeps the devil at bay

Keeping him locked away in the tormented mind of mad man

or is the devil just my alter ego

and it's just me I'm really saving you from  

Reviews

[Firemay]

I'm  so happy my poem actually inspired you to write one of your own.  
It was really good and i think it would be a lot better if you changed it so the lines were more alike, by the length i mean.  Even though a poem can be what ever you please.  
Anyway i like the way you took my idea and turned it into your own sense.  
well done!  

[Mike]

Thank you for the lovely comment. glad you like it