Beauty

This poem is to remind everyone that inner beauty matters and not the outer beauty of a person because maybe there may be an 'ugly' person holding a rose behind them and the 'beautiful' one, a knife.

What is beauty? What is beauty?

it is oftenly asked

What is beauty? What is beauty?

it is every women's task

What is beauty? What is beauty?

it matters not outside

What is beauty? What is beauty?

is it not inside?

Love is beauty. Love is beauty

It should come from within

Love is beauty. Love is beauty

Please, do let it in

Love is beauty. Love is beauty

it's a precious gift to us

Love is beauty. Love is beauty

do not waste it thus

Reviews

[DJ]

Not sure if I like the repetitive lines in this.. perhaps if it was cut down to one repeat per stanza it would flow better and make more of an impact to the reader. I just think it is a bit too repetitive and could improve a bit less. Just my advice, I hope you don't mind. I love the message in this, too many people focus on external beauty when the internal is much more important and shows how great a person truly is. Outer beauty fades, but people with inner beauty are always beautiful. Thanks, Cairo.

[Abbas]

Thank you for the great review Cairo, i think there is beauty in repetition that is why i did it in this poem. Thanks again :)

[Baban.A.A]

a good poem. the meaning is obvious we all know this beuty is fatal, but the beauty is buried within, in each and every soul. I liked the repition which gave a kind of melody to the peom. the confessions of love and beauty were all true, but we still need to remind ourselves through this kind of writing, so well done, and best luck

[Abbas]

Thank you Baban your review is much appreciated! beauty can be like a double edged sword sometimes if shown on the outside but from the inside its just a pure force of light.

[Laminators Dubai]

tell my friends that...
thank god i love black...
just kidding...

look. meaning is good but
repeating one line is not attractive...
and part it into two and than edit it a little bit

keep going...
you got a race to winnn...

[Abbas]

haha thanx again! i will see if i can make the change though i think the poem is good as it is haha what race?

[Laminators Dubai]

that means you can be a good writer!

[Laminators Dubai]

you just need to keep trying...