Lost Dreams

One of my first poems, don't like it that much

Yearning for the unattainable

Wishing for the unrealistic

Will I ever get out of the dreams in my mind?

They took me on an unforgettable journey

Through the woods, mountains, and sand

Rolling up and down the spiral hills, on wheels

Cutting through the thick fog

Up, down, lateral bound

Or am I trapped in an enclosed cage?

Love lost in the blink of an emerald eye.

Dreams dead in the blink of a tear.

For they are never going to occur.

Ignoring reality and loving the dream

Loving the dream more than reality

Killing the brain slowly and swiftly

Forgetting logic and following the heart.

But the heart disappoints

The dreams turn to dust.

My love rolls away.

And reality rains in.

Reviews

[Julesy]

I don't like this piece of writing to much, I have much better writing than this. But I think its a good poem.