Prison

Random haiku...make your own translation

The door slams loudly,

Shutting out your hopes and dreams.

Soon, we'll meet again.

Author's Note

Constructive criticism always welcome!

Reviews

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

I thought it was well written. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[Aimee Mahathy]

Hmm... what I gather is maybe it's from the point of view of Opportunity? Like, the person ruined their chances, but they'll get one again? I don't know, maybe I'm reading too much into it. lol, I tend to do that.
Delightful though!

[Luke]

Something along those lines, yea. Sorry this is 4 years later, lol. You can't ever read too much into writing. Mine, at least. Rarely means what it says.

[Luke]

well, precisely what it says anyway.