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Please do review, I'd love to know what people think about my work. I'm always looking to improve, so constructive criticism is more than welcome!

Blocked in.

Closed off.

Protected.

Isolated

Nothing permeates my wall

The cold night air stays out

But the shades block the sunlight.

How I secretly crave those forbidden rays.

Navigating life in the light

What a thought!

But just as there shall be no chills

Running through my body

No evil, no betrayal

No hate, no surprises

No tears, no broken hearts

There shall be no light.

No love, no companionship

For these walls keep everything out.

And leave only…sorrow

Only an empty room

Author's Note

Always looking for constructive criticism, please let me know what you think!

Reviews

[Liz]

At times it's safer and more comfortable to be left alone, isolated from the rest of humanity.
I like this, I like this a lot.

[Luke]

the trick is not letting that become a lifestyle, lol