You Suck.

This is about if somebody tells you what you are enough times, you will believe them.

 

You suck.

I do?

You suck.

I know.

You suck.

Yes.

You’re mean. 

No.

You’re mean.

I am?

You’re mean.

I’m sorry.

You’re mean.

Yes.

Do this.

Why?

Do this.

No.

Do this.

O.k.

Do this.

I did.

 

Now.

You’re.

One.

Of.

Us.

                                  

 

Author's Note

Please, I know this may not be a good poem, but it is someitmes how I feel.

Reviews

[deleted]

This is absolutely a great read! It was funny, consistent, and intriguing. I didn't stop laughing or wanting to read it. What you say in this poem is so true. Therefore, we must build strong confidence in ourselves. Great read!

[Devyn]

this was awsome. it get's the point across without the whole subject being deluted.

[Anonymous:]]

Poems aren't really my 'cup of tea', but i liked this alot. It was great, you did a good job. I actually get it and relate to it.

[Kyle Killera]

I don't think it's finished. It does seem good and I know what you mean, but i think you could make it longer or change it so that it shows more meaning. Good job though ;)

[linley{luu}]

This is a very good poem. Very true and real. I can relate, as I'm sure many others can. Don't doubt yourself, you're very good. Keep it up!

[SilentDreamer]

This poem is really good Rachel. It shows that after pressuring a lot of the time we give in, give up, and believe things that aren't true. It's very consistent. Awesome job.