Missing A Part Of Me

                               Missing A Part Of Me   

 

When there was you and me I was whole

Now that your gone, I'm missing a part of me.

You said it was best, but how can it be   

Because you were part of me

Nobody understands how much I love you

They couldn't possibly see

I hate that your gone and it makes everything wrong

And I feel like I'm missing a part of me   

They say that I should move on with my life

But no, I'll wait for you

Because without you I'll always be missing a part of me

Author's Note

Well, I actually wrote this for a contest. I think it's ok, but not the best. Please write reviews. Hope you've enjoyed.

Reviews

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

i enjoyed it really good

[Poeticpiers]

You message is clear delivered in poetic prose. But you must move on yesterday is history

[Brianna Brie]

This is very convincing. Envisioning a chunk taken out of your side. Certainly that is what it feels like when we loose someone loved. Great poem! Thanks for entering the Missing Him, Missing Her contest.