brother

its abt a relationship which i have wid a person who's not my blood related brother but somebody who had acquired this position with his interaction wid me. today i'm really proud that he's a part of my life.

Be it day,be it night,

he was there to help me fight.

Loved me,criticised me

when i did wrong,and he could see.

 

Things were tough,

the road was rough,

but he was there

to increase my dare .

 

we laughed & we cried

and the tears dried

because we were together

so the agonies were farther.

 

The journey is still on

with a much stronger bond.

Life's not always fair

but little do i care

because you are  here

for me to care.

 

Author's Note

what do u think about the poem as a whole?,do tell me about my faults.