...mummble...

i'm surrounded by this fake identity...
surrounded by false emotions

deep down i know the truth
i will never bare hold
i wonder why i always do this
wonder why it ends this way

it's been so long
since i've disappeared
i tell myself it's for the best

what a beautiful lie
the thorns of the rose

here's to you,
for you to smile,

even if i won't be the one to see it

here's to you,
for you to be truly happy,

even if that means I won't be

...
...here's to me to finally disappear completely...

so i won't ever bother you...

again...

...

Reviews

[Juliet]

GAH! This was so beautiful! The emotion your able to project into your writing is amazing and unbelievable. Ha I'm lame but I'm such a sucker for when writers make their poems or stories in weird and fun formats. I always go for that. "what a beautiful lie the thorns of the rose" had to be my absolute favorite line it had so much to it in a couple words. Crap now that this is getting long I'm looking like one of those point w****s. I'm not a point w***e I just loved your poem :) awesome work.