Awakening

it awakes-hunger stronger than before
and at the smell of fear, it will come near
to hurt and devour what's left of the soul.

and it won't care, a grin of satisfaction will only appear
and if you cry it'll remain
until you break, until you're struck in an apathetic state
will it leave-when it can't feed off your emotions

Reviews

[Rob Santana]

Oh this one is badass! ! Im shelving this one. This can describe almost anything, fear, person, monster. Great job on this one.

[falling_toxic_rain]

Hmm. It seems to be that you sir are one of not many who actually seem to like my poetry....which everyone finds....dark...

[Rob Santana]

Yup. If you go to my profile you will see why .....

[falling_toxic_rain]

Yup, I think I saw why haha

[Rob Santana]

Haha.

[Adalynn]

Great write. I love reading your writing.

Adalynn

[Distant horizons]

excellent. Sounds like this may be about past fears reappearing in your life, or your fear of it from appearing, but i'm probably wrong. great write though.