Hello and Goodbye

A cloud of red mist enfolds me
the black hole that unravels is
feeding of nothing more than of energy

how far will this go?
it's such a waste of time!

everything is falling apart
corrupting with the very sight
it turns to gray with a simple touch of apathy

can I tell you now
to run?
Run!

Don't look back, it loves to feed from your misery.

the black hole that unravels
wants your flesh and blood
how far will this go?

everything is falling apart
corrupting with the very sight
it turns to gray with a simple touch of apathy.

it wants nothing more than you out of my life.

Reviews

[Brick a Brack]

Dark and powerful, just the way I like it. Nice write.

[No name]

Very powerful write, really enjoyed reading.

[John Patrick Robbins AK..]

Sometimes that darkness jsut controls everything really really strong write fast simple and straight to the point you use every line with tremdous power much respect on this sorry i havent read your work sooner

stay crazy Gonzo

[Adalynn]

Very strong and wonderful write. Great work.

Adalynn

[Distant horizons]

Powerful write again. Strong and powerful image portrayed.