I call it "happy"

speak to me, dear irony.

do you dare read it?
the truth that cuts so thoroughly
the eyes that see it,
ignorant

can you breathe?
even if with every breath we will are closer to death?
are you scared?
we will all one day be dust.
we will all be dead.
we will all be a forgotten memory,
in the mind of those who we met,
and when they are dead,
we will be completely dead
so don't dread on your mistakes,

Reviews

[Nicole Williams]

this is a very interesting read
i dont know if this
"even if with every breath we will are closer to death?"
we will are
is intentional?

[David Burke]

wow, that is truly amazing very deep

[falling_toxic_rain]

thank you for your review. :)

[David Burke]

you're welcome lol

[Kainan Corrales]

Nice topic and the repetition is effective. I don't know if this is intentional, but the comma at the end of your poem made me feel as if this is something you are still working on...

[falling_toxic_rain]

you are right, it's an unfinished thought,
thanks for the review. ^^