Justin

Justin oh Justin
Believe in me
I've tried so hard
To set you free
I think all the time
Always about you
What makes you so beautiful?
What makes it seem true?

The truth to me
I finally see
We seemed so perfect
Because it was like a dream

It's sad to say no more
But what else can I do?
So I say goodbye
But not to just you
To me and my pride
Goodbye too

Reviews

[Ashley]

Thank you :)

[UlteriorMotive]

Yeah, I know how that feels... Great job, the rhythm is pretty great and it's good overall. If you want to improve the rhythm, the last line could be "goodbye to you too" or something of the like, but that's just my opinion. Anyway, great work! d:
-Jake