I'm still alive

I'm still alive
from head to toe
I'm staying here
I'll never go

why don't you believe
believe in me
believe I'll stay
I'll never leave

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

It sounds like one reassuring another that they are important enough to not get left behind..... that they matter, so you will stick around because you choose to. I hear all levels of trust and things that could test confidence in most of your poems. This and the "Bipolar" poem do that for me. You are short, sweet, straight to the point, and leave us with the cutest message!! Beautiful Ashley. xoxo -Mark

[Ashley]

Thanx =D its nice to know that people are enjoying my poems, this website hav boosted my confidence majorly :)

[Patrick Henry]

: ) Maybe it's me being selfish or just particular, but there are only a few poets I visit EVERY time I come on here. YOU are one of these poets, so I thank YOU for letting me enjoy you. : ) It feels good to smile. xoxo -Mark

[Ashley]

Thts wat I try 2 do...show people my life, but let people enjoy it n not get any sympathy

[Patrick Henry]

A martyr!! : ) ....a martyr who will stick around to play another game of "Jinx" with a friend!! lol Glad you're alive.... xoxo -mark

[Ashley]

Lol :) thank you :) glad I'm alive too