The thing I’m writing about is kind of old, but has been on my mind for the past couple days. A very bizarre story emerged maybe about a year ago, but its still very interesting. I will be going into the alleged extraterrestrials that live among us according to a couple Bulgarian scientists. Luchezar Filipov deputy of space institution in Bulgaria, came to the media and presented startling statements. According to him Aliens that call themselves “starseekers” have been here on earth for some time now and have been studying the human species closely. He says they are friendly aliens, not looking for war, he also stated they will reveal themselves when they feel the human race is ready to acknowledge there existence. According to him they sneer at our fossil fueled ran economy, while they use antimatter and nuclear fussion for there energy supply. Also they extraterrestrials look down on cosmetic surgery and anything of the sort. They believe anything unnatural is wrong. In my opinion I don’t know what to believe. Are these men for real? Or are they just crazy. Its creepy to think that things you can’t see are watching and studying you. The scary part is that these men aren't coming out with this information to self promote themselves, they are highly professional and is in charge of there country’s space program.
"but its still very interesting" - "it's"
comma after "live among us"
"a couple Bulgarian scientists" - "a couple of Bulgarian scientists"
comma after "Luchezar Filipov"
"deputy of space institution" - dropped word? - also, this maybe should be capitalized
comma after "According to him"
"Aliens" - don't capitalize
"here on earth" - "Earth"
period, not comma, after "not looking for war"
"acknowledge there existence" - "acknowledge their existence"
comma after "According to him"
"our fossil fueled ran economy" - "our fossil fuel-run economy"
"nuclear fussion" - "fusion"
"for there energy supply" - "for their energy supply"
"they extraterrestrials" - "the"
"They believe anything unnatural is wrong." - Cosmetic surgery is unnatural and thus wrong, but using antimatter is okay? Sounds like a serious logic glitch.
"In my opinion I don’t know what to believe" - awkwardly phrased - You think you don't know what to believe? - Try deleting "In my opinion"
question mark after "Or are they just crazy"
"Its creepy" - "It's"
"self promote" - "self-promote"
period, not comma, after "themselves"
"and is in charge" - "and in charge"
"there country’s space program." - "their"
You can find scientists just about anywhere who believe weird things; the fact that they're scientists does not make them immune to whatever makes other people believe weird things. (I personally know a microbiologist who thinks that science fiction is the same as witchcraft - obviously she's wrong.)
"but its still very interesting" - "it's"
comma after "live among us"
"a couple Bulgarian scientists" - "a couple of Bulgarian scientists"
comma after "Luchezar Filipov"
"deputy of space institution" - dropped word? - also, this maybe should be capitalized
comma after "According to him"
"Aliens" - don't capitalize
"here on earth" - "Earth"
period, not comma, after "not looking for war"
"acknowledge there existence" - "acknowledge their existence"
comma after "According to him"
"our fossil fueled ran economy" - "our fossil fuel-run economy"
"nuclear fussion" - "fusion"
"for there energy supply" - "for their energy supply"
"they extraterrestrials" - "the"
"They believe anything unnatural is wrong." - Cosmetic surgery is unnatural and thus wrong, but using antimatter is okay? Sounds like a serious logic glitch.
"In my opinion I don’t know what to believe" - awkwardly phrased - You think you don't know what to believe? - Try deleting "In my opinion"
question mark after "Or are they just crazy"
"Its creepy" - "It's"
"self promote" - "self-promote"
period, not comma, after "themselves"
"and is in charge" - "and in charge"
"there country’s space program." - "their"
You can find scientists just about anywhere who believe weird things; the fact that they're scientists does not make them immune to whatever makes other people believe weird things. (I personally know a microbiologist who thinks that science fiction is the same as witchcraft - obviously she's wrong.)
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