love lost

Fries & Feels from Amirah Tajdin on Vimeo.

*please leave a message after the tone* 

hey its me 

you know 

the one you left behind

i could never fully tap into your mind 

i mean 

you could paint my clouds 

but have me thinking 

there is someone else you long for 

but here i am asking for more 

just another fling of yours

lets be real 

you weren't real to me 

just wrong for me 

and 

i’m not asking for an apology you could've been good to me 

this wasn't suppose to be a long voicemail 

i must not cry over split milk 

couldn't be your friend 

so we've made it to the end 

well this was short lived whatever this is 

Author's Note

Based on a short film called fries and feelings by Amirah Tajdi.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"you could paint my clouds"
I like that line, it could mean carefully like a Rembrandt or haphazardly like a Pollock...
and some relationships cannot move to the level of friends if the romantic part does not work out.
j.

[conversations with her pen..]

thank you for your review jacob,
I agree with what you said as well. Sometimes the love you share with someone is so strong and you just can't settle for only being friends