the world is y̶o̶u̶r̶s̶ ours

we roam on 

concrete streets 

love is free

our hearts 

stained cities

he's a bit witty 

  humans constantly 

on the go

doing it all 

for the dough 

converse and let

the truth be told

connecting souls

lost track of 

time and place

we must learn

to love ourselves 

then embrace 

homemade CDs 

from the one you love

symbolizing Younglove

we only got one life to live

 so live it up

young creatives 

bout to blow it up

bunch of fashionistas

too bold to get in 

their feelings 

can’t go on with life 

without any meaning

sipping champagne 

out our golden cups

authorities might

look at us 

as a bunch of

 f**k ups

little do they know 

we’ve already won

our own battles 

ferris wheel rides 

 give you a chance

 to take in life

its similar to sounds of

I now pronounce you

 husband and wife

as life goes on 

we might lose sight 

our minds seem to do 

a lot of exploring at night 

  life is really what you make it 

brainstorming ideas on a daily basis 

  in the mix of it all

try not to take life for granted 

just continue to climb the highest towers 

because this world is y̶o̶u̶r̶s̶ ours 

  

 

Author's Note

this poem was based off this beautiful song i adore

enjoy!

Reviews

[Chrisjeey]

Late to have it but still sweet to read

[peter Duggan]

Nice write Jada Nicely written, with a clear message in it. I enjoyed the read, my friend....Peter

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thank you, glad you enjoyed this

[fireangelpoet]

It is pretty good, I enjoyed it, the message is true, and the flow was nice. Good job!

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thank you!

[fireangelpoet]

You're welcome!

[Lola_Bee]

A contemporary piece. Very youthful and raw. Great piece. Such an awesome flow

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You got my intentions down pat, thank you!

[Kokulo K. Lawuobahsumo]

Your message in this poem is clear. You tried to connect the activities of every day living, which you did.

As a platform to help bring out the best, can you please help know the style you used in this piece?

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree dear Jada.
"just continue to climb the highest towers 
because this world is y̶o̶u̶r̶s̶ ours "
The above lines are amazing and perfect.
Coyote

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thank you!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Jada.

[AlinaTheCacti]

Not sure as my age would be appropriate to review this, but I enjoyed the poem