all good things come to an end

 

this is where it begins and ends, hello my friend it was so nice to see you again 

then there's the strange thought of them forgetting you and eventually, you hear their voice that says oh you look great, but what was your name again

and now that were passed that, let's sit on rooftops and hum our favourite songs while we indulge in this soon to be great love

let's scream at the top of our lungs, telling each other I love you and this is where we’ve always belonged 

you and I, we’ll soak up in the sun while you hold me in your arms and whisper in my ear saying you’re everything I want

let's take pictures that we can look at it when we’ve grown old together, so maybe one day our children will look back at it and witness the amazing times we’ve spent together

remember that time you once told me that you couldn’t stop thinking about your future life, and how you realized you didn’t want any part of it if I wasn’t your future wife

I miss those nights, where our silly little fights turn into play fights and just an awesome time

and now you’ll let me lay on your chest and you’ll look out in the open, meanwhile were both left with a million thoughts that will continue to remain unspoken

maybe it was the lack of communication, and now we spend time apart knowing that it will only cause us frustration

we now spend more time screaming and yelling, so caught up that we haven’t realized this story seems like it already found its ending

I thought you said you’ll always be my motivation and I was your everything, or I was wrong and this was one great big illusion 

and now we’ve concluded that you and I no longer remain exclusive, no longer my cupid, love is stupid 

this is where it begins and ends, hello my friend it was so nice to see you again

                                      

                      “do you ever think this great love will reoccur again?” 

Author's Note

this piece was based on a short film i came across, if your able to watch it you will be able to match my words to the visual itself.

Reviews

[emmajoy]

There seems to be a heartbreak somewhere but one that recurs and spins around to create frissons of wonder if.. The words you use and how really lure the reader into wanting to know what happened, why, did you share, forgive or what... fine writing that.. not merely laying words like a path but beckoning hungry reader to follow it. Great writing, intelligently focussed on the movie you quote.

[conversations with her pen..]

thank you so much for this thoughtful review :)

glad you enjoyed it!

[Ayvid N]

Love runs its course, as surely as a river does, slipping away into the sea. Your capture it all beautifully...

[conversations with her pen..]

thank you!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

The poem is very nice and so does the question at the end. Well the answer for tnat question is "YES" it does. True love always finds the way!

[conversations with her pen..]

i agree & thank you for reviewing :)

[JC]

again, you bring us into those early romantic days of love when we can't leave each other's side, and then the tragic downfall that happens so many times. I like the imagery and the flow of this one.

[conversations with her pen..]

i love your insight on this, thank you.

[Suhd]

A sad undertone in this poem is what makes it a whole. The transformation of people from being too nice at the beginning of most relationships into too hard to unfold themselves is here. Love this one :)

[conversations with her pen..]

you're interpretation means everything to me, thats exactly what i was going for.. so thank you for taking the time to review this.

[Justin]

amazing!!!! one day you and that person are having fun and enjoying life the next you and that person aren't on speaking terms!!! you hit everything on the head in this poem!!! amazing job!!!

[conversations with her pen..]

yeah you're right, thats exactly what i was going for and thank you I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[Justin]

your welcome, I posted a new story called poison, if u get a second please check it out thanks :)

[Greg Farina]

Very tragic in a very good way!

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thank you, means a lot!

[Kimberly Anastasia]

I love the rhyming in this and the story that's being told! I can relate, unfortunately. Only suggestion I have would be to change the formatting so it's easier to read (that might just be me though).

[conversations with her pen..]

I'm really glad you enjoyed it, my main objective is to give people something to relate to and ill take that into consideration for next time!