Kiss me

You must be a criminal
Because you stole my heart
When you gave me your killer smile
Cupid must have shot me with his dart
Every time I close my eyes
You are there waiting for me
My heart was set flying
When you asked me "what's your name?"


You never stop smiling
Please don't let go of my hand
Keep your gorgeous blue eyes on me
Can't you see that I love you
Trust me when I say
Kiss me Now

You must be the one
Because my heart beats faster
when I see you standing at my door
Just keep your hands around my waist
As we dance on the dance floor
I've wondered where have you been all my life
But that doesn't matter
now that you are here with me


So, never stop smiling
Don't let go of my hand
Keep you gorgeous blue eyes on me
Can't you see I love you!
Trust me when I say
Kiss me now

Kiss me now
So I know this isn't a dream
Tell me that you love me
And seal it with a kiss
I have missed you more than ever
Please let this kiss last forever
Yes, we were meant to be together.
So kiss me one last time

Author's Note

Eh, It's not my best...so comments?

Reviews

[Criss ;)]

It's a best song :) I really enjoyed reading this lovely song. You're growing now. Your all stanzas're lovely and totally heartfelt. It's a kool an adorable piece you written in suit of a lovely as welll as in beautiful form :) Wonderful song, keep writing and making more songs. 50000/100 :)

[Muhammad Qasim]

i heard once that what you write is an expression of your thoughts at the time and this piece is marvelous :D simple yet romantic and enchanting! keep up the good work :D

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks!!! :)

[Muhammad Qasim]

you are welcome ;D

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

so cute and romantic. About anyone in particular or? I enjoyed reading that keep writing :)
P.S: why are you thinking of leaving the sight? If u love writing i think u should stay :)

[Daniel Eckert]

It was a good poem. I enjoyed the read! Thank you for sharing it

[Half Dream]

Sweet and enjoyable! :D

[Horizon K.]

So sweet! This for some reason plays like a song in my head... Ahhh... Love!

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks! :D

[beautiful dreamer]

so good!!!!!

[Rhea752]

Awww that is so cute!!! true love always prevails. Except in Romeo and Juliet,then hate prevails.... sorry... I am not a romantic person.Nice write!!! Keep it up!!! :D

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks! :) lol

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks! :D

[Edward]

Ahh the amazing bits of falling in love :3 always double checking to see if they love you.. Anyway it is a good write :3 keep it up my friend :3

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks! :D