Save Me Now

My first song I have ever written :D

Forever alone

I was destined to be

trapped in the dark

Alone in this corner

where no one can hear me

where no one can find me

All alone I was destined to be

 

Where are you now?

When I need you so badly...

All that I hear right now

are the sound of my tears

 

(2x)

Can't you hear my desperate screams

pouring out of this wretched dream

Come and save me now

Please come and save me now!

 

An endless abyss

of shadows and darkness

Oh, How I do hate it

With my last dying breath

 

Oh, I hear the laughter

as it echoes in my ears

Please make it stop!

for I don't want to be...

 

Forever alone

I'm destined to be

trapped in a box 

with no light to see

All I see is darkness 

and no loving friend

Please take my life

so this suffering can end 

 

 (2x)

Can't you hear my desperate screams

pouring out of this wretched dream

Come and save me now

Please come and save me now!

Author's Note

This is my first song I have ever written....I was feeling lonely so that it what inspired me to write it! Hope you enjoy it even though it a bit depressing!

Reviews

[Dark Rider]

Very nice. I liked it! :) I wish I could write songs, but all of my attempts failed badly.

[The Invisible Girl]

lol! Thanks! :D

[Dark Rider]

You're welcome! ^^

[Bella Luna]

This is so good! I think we have all gone through this kind of loneliness and this is a perfect depiction!

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks!! ^-^

[The Fallen]

This is amazing!!! :D
I love it!!!
I'm shaking! .-. I had three energy drinks (So not good for me) and I'm at a dance!!!! IM GETTING INSPRIATION!!!MAYBE DESTINY WILL COME OUT OF HIDING!!!!

Anyways I love this so much. You never cease to amaze me

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks!! XD I hope it will help Destiny out of hiding! lol Oh, no you must be very hyper from those energy drinks! lol

[The Fallen]

Oh I ammm!!!!! >.< My cousins bought me them !!!!!! SOOOOOO HYPERRRR

[The Invisible Girl]

Haha!! I could use an energy drink! lol But I need my beauty sleep!! lol *yawns*

[The Fallen]

DNWEFHGFWEHASDHDJBFHJGBDSY IMMA BE UP ALL NIGHT GIRL

[The Invisible Girl]

Hahaha! Well have fun, but don't do something stupid. LOL! At least you're having fun while I'm at home...bored out of my mind!!!!! O.o

[The Fallen]

Oh I'd never do anything stupid!! My cousins are here...though them being drunk doesnt really help...But whatever....And DO SOMETHING FUNNNNNN

[The Invisible Girl]

okay...*thinks* I'm going to go to sleep! lol :P ttyl! byee!

[The Fallen]

thats no funnn but okay nightt

[The Invisible Girl]

Haha! I know. :P Byee!

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

this is so sweet and if your looking for somebody their out there somewhere.
good job on the written song I'm proud of you 100/100

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks for reading! XD I'm glad you like it! :)

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

no problem