Save Me Now

My first song I have ever written :D

Forever alone

I was destined to be

trapped in the dark

Alone in this corner

where no one can hear me

where no one can find me

All alone I was destined to be

 

Where are you now?

When I need you so badly...

All that I hear right now

are the sound of my tears

 

(2x)

Can't you hear my desperate screams

pouring out of this wretched dream

Come and save me now

Please come and save me now!

 

An endless abyss

of shadows and darkness

Oh, How I do hate it

With my last dying breath

 

Oh, I hear the laughter

as it echoes in my ears

Please make it stop!

for I don't want to be...

 

Forever alone

I'm destined to be

trapped in a box 

with no light to see

All I see is darkness 

and no loving friend

Please take my life

so this suffering can end 

 

 (2x)

Can't you hear my desperate screams

pouring out of this wretched dream

Come and save me now

Please come and save me now!

Author's Note

This is my first song I have ever written....I was feeling lonely so that it what inspired me to write it! Hope you enjoy it even though it a bit depressing!

Reviews

[Half Dream]

This might be depressing but still beautiful! I'm not good on writing songs but you did great job on this peice! Awesome writing! :)

[.......]

Wow very nice, I have wrote songs since I was a kid. This is amazing

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks!!! :)

[Wolfwind]

A fine flow of feeling and tempo you've created. One certainly feels the loneliness within the pieces emotions.
It sparks the image of a super sponge flying in on a rainbow and soaking up all the darkness and tears and bringing back the sun. =) Happy endings are good!

Great Ink! Hope all is well now.
Aaron

[The Invisible Girl]

Yes, all is well. I'm not lonely anymore plus I'm trying to smile more! lol :D Thanks for reading!!! :)

[Lexi Villanueva]

I like it ive listened to songs and read songs like this good job keep writing.

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks!! :)

[Horizon K.]

This is so sad, and definitely those are lyrics anyone could relate to. I especially like the first two chorus lines. Very curious as to the tune as well! Really great!

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks!!! :D Are you almost done with the next chapter of your book?? :D

[***The Lost***]

Emotions flow from the waltzing words, forming an elegant dance of passion. Depressing or not a good write is a good write.

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks!! ^-^ I'm glad you liked it!! XD

[Whiskurz]

I've been writing and publishing songs for 20 years this is really good my friend.....Whisk

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks!! :D

[CreativeCookie]

Great as usual! Keep on keeping on!

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks! ^-^