Wanted

You know I can't live without you

You know I can't breathe without you

You're the only one that truly understands me

You are the only one that makes me feel like me

 

I miss

your gentle touch

your encouraging smiles

your loving kisses

 

Where are you now

that you are gone?

 

Are you over the hills?

Are you under the ocean?

Are you across the world?

Are you up in the clouds?

 

Please come back

to my warm embrace

 

You are the only one that makes me feel wanted

You alone makes me feel beautiful

You make me feel like I can fly around the world.

 

I want you to come back!

 

Why did you leave me?

Was it something I said

or do?

 

My heart is breaking

Can't you hear it crumble?

I need you..

You are wanted in my heart.

Reviews

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

In two words...
you're unforgettable!

If i got it right...
and so are you!

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks! :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

ok

[***The Lost***]

A masterpiece painted with gentle strokes of emotion.
Un beau travail de la perfection.

[The Invisible Girl]

I'm guessing that is French soo...Merci beaucoup d'avoir lu mon poème.lol I love Google translate! :P

[***The Lost***]

Aucun problème, vous êtes un auteur étonnant ainsi naturellement je vais lire vos écritures.

[The Invisible Girl]

:3 Merci! Vous êtes un très bon poète!:)

[Forever Hidden]

Emotional, touching, ah what other things could I say about this?!
I LOVE IT!

[The Invisible Girl]

lol! :) Glad you liked it!!! :)

[patti]

that is really good piece of work... totally enjoyed reading every line, nice work

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks! :D

[krish]

GREAT WRITTEN....AFTER A MANY DAYS'..I'VE READ SUCH SORT OF POEM.
I LIKED IT BUT I TOO LOVED IT....
"WANTED...WANTED....WANTED,
I DON'T WANNA SEE ANY ONE HAUNTED,
I WANNNA MY PARTNER THAT'S MAYB BOUNDED,
WHERE R U MY ,I WANNA WALK WITH U ,STAY WITH U & GET RIGHT PATH AFTER MAKE MY STEP'S ON WAY OF SUCCESS TRREE-CLIMBING,
I'M CALLING YOU & WE'LL GO FOR RIDING,
I WANNA LIVE + STAY + SMILE + WALK + ENJOY + TALK + PLAY + RUN + SING + FLY BUT DON'T WANNA CRY WITH YOU,
SO....MY MY HEART SAYING .......
WANTED.......WANTED............WANTED............................"

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks for the review! :)

[krish]

MY PLEASURE...

[♥ Kinnixk]

Very beautiful. I love it. :)

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks! Glad you liked it! :D

[teardrop]

This is a wonderful sweet piece. very nicely written.

[The Invisible Girl]

Glad you liked it! ^-^

[Angelic_Dreamer]

aww this is sweet it kind of makes me feel like the charachter is desperate for her old love and I just love things that pretain to "old flames". Great job with this poem and how did you get the freestyle as the font?

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks! ^-^ I wrote the poem on Microsoft Word with the font and copied and pasted it on here. Hope that helps. :)

[Angelic_Dreamer]

Yeah it does I sort of figured that but when I tried it didnt really work out vey well:(

[The Invisible Girl]

That sucks! :(

[Angelic_Dreamer]

ikr?