My Battle.

I'm back

can't you feel it?

I'm in the air

 waiting, watching, preparing for..

 ..the solution for my pain

I got rid of it once

but it keeps coming back

haunting me

he asking me for more..

 ..pain

I enjoy it

I feed on it

I prey on her

can't you see that she's weak

ready to fall

only thing I have to say is..

 ..shut up

shut up

I don't want to hear your lies

I don't need these lies

 

you're ugly

I'm beautiful

 

you're nothing

I have worth

 

unloved

I am loved by God 

nobody cares for you

I have family and friends

 

it can all go away with just a single cut

you must go away

 

My name is insecurity

 

insecurity. you mean nothing to me

because I  lived it, I fought it, and in the end

I will defeat it  as many times as I have too.

Author's Note

Black: insecurity
Pink: Is me.
What do you think?

Reviews

[Felecia]

Wow...one word I can say to descirbe this. Powerful. This poem is full of strength and pure right. I can completely relate to this. Insecurity is a powerful thing, and so is will power. We're able to fight back this thing, "Insecurity", we will fight back every. single. time. But it all depends on us, and I believe every one of us is strong enough to fight back. Everyone of us is strong, beautiful, and loved.
Great poem. Love it

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks!!! :D Glad you liked it!

[Savior of Time]

This. Is. Me. This is an amazing poem and I really like how you made it a conversation with insecurity.

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks!!!! :D

[Euro]

Very nice poem!
I really liked this and how well you are defying insecurity :)
Keep it up,
-Penelope H.

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks! :D

[Euro]

You're welcome :)

[***The Lost***]

Your words ring true. I enjoy how you formatted the poem, it shows the conflicting forces of your own inner emotions. It is truly beautiful.

[The Invisible Girl]

Glad you liked it!! ^-^

[RachelReaper]

I think this was a very powerful poem and quite possibly my favorite thing I've ever read by you. The contrasting colors and voices and how you make your voice ten times more impactful than insecurity makes it all the worth while. I loved this!

[The Invisible Girl]

Really?! Awesome! Glad you liked it!! :D

[Backlight Burner]

I love the way you formatted this whole thing, it really makes it even more enjoyable to read. This is indeed a great pooem, and something many people face. It is never easy defeating our own insecurities, well put!!

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks for reading! :)

[A Teenage Girl]

I'm jealous, haha. I'm jealous of the way you have this certain drive that keeps you from falling back into the arms of self mutilation. You seem like such an incredibly strong person! And if you keep this attitude, and don't believe the lies of that inner voice, I know you can completely beat the insecurities.

[The Invisible Girl]

Glad you like it! Thanks for the review. :)

[silvereyes]

Wow... I loved it. Nice style of writing :-)

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks! :)

[AlwaysCasey]

Nice. It really gets the struggle perfectly (I feel like your taking lessons from someone :) I've never seen you write so well before

[The Invisible Girl]

Actually I'm not taking lesson from anyone. :) I'm just writing what I feel. Thanks for reading! :D

[Bella Luna]

This is so great! You really captured the internal struggle perfectly!

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks! :)