Love, Your Secret Admirer.

My Love, 

I want you to know that when I'm

thinking of you it makes

my heart start to race

When I'm thinking of you it makes

my hands start to shake

When thinking of your smile 

it makes me blush

When I'm thinking of you talking to me

it makes me giggle nervously

When I'm thinking of how you say my name 

sends chills down my spine.

When I'm thinking of when I'll see you again 

makes me excited.

When I'm thinking of your eyes

it makes me want stare into them forever

Right now when I'm thinking of you 

it makes this hard to write

When thinking of you 

it's painful to know that you probably don't even know who I am. 

I pass you through the halls and never did you glance at me. 

I get the courage to talk to you, but you are with another girl

who is prettier than me...

But, I just want to say that I can't stop thinking of you. 

I never thought this could happen to a nobody like me, but

I know now that...

I LOVE YOU! 

You may crumble this letter and think this is a joke.

But its not.

To spare my pain

I wouldn't tell you who I am.

But I leave you with this

When I'm thinking of you I just hope you never forget me...

-Love,

your Secret Admirer

Author's Note

A letter to my secret crush!! <3

Reviews

[Jem Sagcal]

I thought to be incredibly sweet from the beginning down to middle, then a sudden sadness through the end. It'd be sad if he wouldn't know your true feelings and incredibly painful to see the person you love with another.

This was a very beautiful piece, a good job! Good luck with this crush of yours!

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks for reading!! ^-^

[Najam Us Saher]

Wow. It touched my heart. I have no more words to say how heart touching this is.

[Cecelia A. Green]

omg i really like this. i love one sided love stories because i know im not alone and i can relate. really well done on this piece.

[Abhigyan]

sooo good, just the type i wanted to write, got some inspiration, now my time for experitmentation. :-),
All in all, excellent portrayl of feelings.

[Angelic_Dreamer]

Aww so sweet. There were a few mistakes but other then that I enjoyed ur writing. The title really grabbed my attention as I was looking for who was online so I can check out their writing and u just so happened to be one of them that grabbed my attention with ur username

[The Invisible Girl]

Glad you like it!! :) That's so cool! XD Glad I choiced Invisible Girl as my username! lol :)

[Angelic_Dreamer]

lol I should check out more of your writing to see more of ur good writing

[The Invisible Girl]

You should! ;) lol And I'll check out your writings :)

[Angelic_Dreamer]

ok:)

[The Dreamer]

woow - thats beautiful , sweet and tugging...... i know how it feels to want to make a lasting impression on someone you admire, and how it feels when you want that person to notice you - ive been a secret admirer too... many times :P

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks for reading! :)

[Eliott]

That's really sweet! I bet he really wants to know who you are now!

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks for reading! :)

[Jetta Zippora]

I love this so much!! Very lovely and sweet write, friend. :)

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks for reading! ^-^

[Lina Grey]

awww! This ias so beautiful and sweet, yet sad... did you really send it?

[The Invisible Girl]

no...:( I want to, but I'm too scared too. But thanks for reading!!! :D

[Lina Grey]

ahah I know that feeling. I wrote a love letter in sixth grade to a guy a had the biggest crush on, and I was terrified about how he'd react so I ripped it up and threw it away... kindof a good thing I did, as he already had a girlfriend :P that'd'a been awkward...

[ni ni]

Thats soooo cute!!!! and I can so relate to this...

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks for reading!! :D

[Hannah Messer]

Aw... :( It's sweet and sad at the same time.

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks for reading!! ^-^