Hurry

Hurry

A Poem by The Invisible Girl

They are coming.

Don't you hear them laughing at my suffering

It's their cruel game they cast on me


Watching me perish alone

Where no one can find me

Where no one can save me



All I see is black

crushing me from all sides.

I'm in a box 

and I can't get out

Oh, God save me from this cruel suffering.

I need you. 

I'm all alone

No one else to reline on..

but YOU.



Please ,God, hurry

I can feel my tears coming

Can't you see I'm shaking in fear

Take it away


The Loneliness, the Sadness, the Hate

They are coming for me.....................

© 2012 The Invisible Girl


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I really enjoyed this poem. At firt I thought it was people who were coming for her, but then at the end you said Loneliness sadness and hate it totally took a turn,I absoulty loved this Awesome write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Invisible Girl

11 Years Ago

Thanks!! ^-^
Very dark and creepy.. A sense of fear and paranoia. Are they really coming kind of feeling for real or just in the mind.. The depth of the loneliness, hate and fear can be felt..x

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Invisible Girl

11 Years Ago

Thanks for reading!! ^-^

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