The Break Up

I'm not over you

Don't you see fresh tears in my hazel eyes?

I still love you

Why can't you understand

I'm not over you.

 

You made me into your cruel game.

each note you play from your pathetic excuse

killed me deep inside.

 

Do you see we are just a like?

Do you see that we are soul mates?

Do you see that I'm not over you.

 Boy. get back to where you belong

In my heart to forever stay.

 

You say it was never to be

I say you are wrong!

 

You leave, you forget the moments we spent together

Soon, I leave and find someone new.

I guess is was never so suppose to be you and me

I take it all back all I said before because

I found someone better than you

Goodbye, my first love.

I have another to love

and he will love me back..

Unlike you.   

Author's Note

Randomly thought of it! lol :P Hope you like it!!

kind of got the ideas from listen to these songs!! :)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V57Vp03dhn8

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kBdarl_Bzbw

Reviews

[Mir]

I liked the way this seemed to flow. I liked the way the poem 'turned around' at the end, to where you were better of without him. Great writing! The last stanza is my favorite! It kind of has like a 'bam' to it. lol if you get what I mean! :)

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks for reading!! ^-^

[Mir]

Your welcome! :)

[Larrycall]

I like how you changed your thoughts as you found some one better . Showing you didnt truely want to face he was right. 100

[michael]

i love the way you started by showing how much u cherished the erstwhile relationship. I also love the ending that demonstrates the courage and strength with which you moved on with.

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks for reading!! ^-^

[hardscoper6]

First love break ups are the hardest... they suck, really bad lol unfortunately for me, i went through some rough stuff in my experience so i know where you are coming from with this, good poem! keep it up!

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks for reading! ^-^