In Pieces

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Our hearts are scattered all around the dark room.

If only we knew what we were doing before this happen.

You broke my heart and I broke yours. 

We failed miserably. 

We both perished in the end. 

I didn't give you the love that you deserved. 

You gave me your love, but I rejected cruelly. 

You never asked for anything in return. 

Its just that I did, but instead I gave you your broken heart. 

I want to take it back now. 

Every word, every action just to have you back in my arms. 

But our hearts, our love is in pieces scattered on the damp and dirty ground. 

All the parts are disfigured making it unfixable for now. 

I started to love you right but it was too late.

You gave up on me and looked for love somewhere else. 

You ignored my love that I was trying to give to get your love in return. 

You were annoyed of my selfishness, so you dismissed me just like when I dismissed you. 

What you don't know is that you still love me. 

I know, because I'm the one that threw away my selfishness.

I picked up the dirty pieces of your heart. 

With blood and mud on my knees, I pick the sharp pieces of your love for me.

I manage to put them back together, because our love still lived on in those pieces of our hearts. 

I walked to you not knowing if you'll accept me back.

But here is your heart that I broke.

I handed you your pathetic taped heart . 

You smiled and you reach down in your pocket and pull out a brand new heart.

Its red coat was sparkling and smiled at me. 

I looked at him in confusion not knowing what this heart meant

He laughed and said," You are mine, and I love you. Take it. Its yours, now."

We smiled and embraced each other. 

We can never be separate. 

Our hearts, our love will never be in pieces again. 

Love always wins in the end. 

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Author's Note

I was inspired to write this from a song called "In Pieces" by Foreigner. So hope you like it....I hope it not choppy...Please comment!!! O.o I want to know if its good or not

Reviews

[Brianaswriting]

this makes me feel so much better about the love trials us humans go through in life, so nice!

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks for reading! Glad you enjoyed it!! :D

[Castonovia]

Definitely good with its sweet cuteness intensified by being apart and all the strong emotions... awwww, fixing heartbreak with a band-aid, my kind of story indeed ;)

[RachelReaper]

oh, this was sooooo sweet! Absolutely warmed my heart *haha, heart* to read it. At first i thought "aw, how sad" but i liked that you didn't let it stay sad, that you fixed the heartbreak and made it happy in the end. Excellent!

[The Invisible Girl]

Glad you like it!!! ^-^

[CreativeCookie]

Don't worry, it's really phenomenal and makes me jealous of your amazing writing abilities, just like the rest of your work!
Love,
CreativeCookie

[The Invisible Girl]

Aww! Thanks Creative Cookie!! ^-^

[The Fallen]

Aweh such a sweet, and enduring poem! I love this poem, and I can totally relate (: Amazing poem

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks!!! ^-^

[Linda]

This is a really cute poem, I really like it.
And it's not choppy at all, it sounds good to me :)
Keep up the good work! :D

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks for reading it!!!! ^-^

[Linda]

You're welcome :)

[AlwaysCasey]

Holy crap, Sarah! I didn't know you could write like this!!!!!! I love it!!!!! I put it in my library :)

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks :D