Tsunami of Sadness

almost lead to an emotional death

terrified of what's within 
did we begin as a sin
was it everything i had for you was wrong?
tell me what can i do to make you stay 
will my heart stay forever in your hands
or are you kiss it to the wind and let it fly away

i feel confused and hollowed 
like an invisible knife emptying
my insides.
the music that i love to hear 
the words i love to see with glee
in my soul my body and my mind

are you gonna take away 
the only love i really believe in?
are you gonna let it slip away?
will my dreams of having you in my arms 
be destroyed?

Reviews

[~*_Michelle_*~]

Special piece of writing... There was enough emotion. Not too much, not too little. Very good. It gave me a cold feeling...It returned a cold memory. Nice :]

[Hanan_Maliah]

More then interesting...the intensity is obvious and the flow strokes the darkside of my emotions...I liked it and will be back!

[Mitch*Dandy]

Wow.. Very.. Hm, how should I put this? Love it! Emotional poems are always my favorite. Guess what.. you put a good enough amount of emotion. I gotta say this sadness is quite noticeable. In a good way of course! Nice as I usually put it..