Lips

Lips

A Poem by Tristan Noir
"

something to do with love & lust

"

 

I want your blood on my lips

My tongue and your skin lightly gripped

By my teeth

Ill cut u in so deep

You’ll never forget the taste

I offer or shove every time

Never the same

But familiar

Truly perculiar.

© 2010 Tristan Noir


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thanks alex =)

Posted 14 Years Ago


i really like this:)

Posted 14 Years Ago


it's no vampire.it's just me

Posted 14 Years Ago


Strong yet short. Very good! :D Ohh, I found this to be about a vampire...Am i correct? Hehehe.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very good poem. Short but amazing. Your wording is stunning and the voice that comes from this piece is stunning.

--The Angel of the Earth--

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow, this is very well written. I can actually hear a voice while reading this. Very good!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on March 25, 2010
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Tristan Noir
Tristan Noir

MACAU, MACAU, Macao S.A.R.



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