Prognosis?

For the Creative Poetry group... words given in italics... inscribe, inuendos, devotion, riveting, syndrome, mischief

  Somewhere along the line
                      of getting
                to know
                            you
            a syndrome
                  develops
        where ordinary words
     become riveting,
                            alive:
        passionate
                innuendos
     bent to
                     inscribe
                themselves
                  indelibly upon
          the memory

What divine
                        mischief
             is afoot
                             when first I
                   dare to tread
          into
   the realm of
                         devotion--
         developing
             every symptom
                   of the blessed
         curse
diagnosed
                      as, simply
                           love

Reviews

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Great write that you have penned in this one about young or early love...Interesting design that is different..Keep the creative pen flowing.Sunflower

[Poetic Beauty]

This poem conveys your thought and emotions quite clearly. Thanks for posting in Creative Poetry. I love reading the poems you come up with for the group.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Awe yes love can be quite the rascal and sneak up on you... such a playful nature with in your words that can make you giddy just like love.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I really like it! It is very well written you made a lovely poem with the words.
Loving the comparison to love as a sickness.. nice! Good luck.

Chloe