Prognosis?

For the Creative Poetry group... words given in italics... inscribe, inuendos, devotion, riveting, syndrome, mischief

  Somewhere along the line
                      of getting
                to know
                            you
            a syndrome
                  develops
        where ordinary words
     become riveting,
                            alive:
        passionate
                innuendos
     bent to
                     inscribe
                themselves
                  indelibly upon
          the memory

What divine
                        mischief
             is afoot
                             when first I
                   dare to tread
          into
   the realm of
                         devotion--
         developing
             every symptom
                   of the blessed
         curse
diagnosed
                      as, simply
                           love

Reviews

[GTVile]

Wow, this is very good. I like how you stimulate multiple sensory receptors with the shape, flow, and the words themselves. This is well thought and well felt. You combined the two elements of thought and feeling very well and in riveting fashion!

[Anicca]

Form = wonderful, choice of words = wonderful, flow = wonderful, everything was wonderful. I like the sudden font change at the end.

[An owl on the moon]

I like the form and flow of this one. It moved with a vivid depth of emotion. Loved the line: "What divine mischief is afoot.." That alone could inspire a book.. Wondrous write to be sure!

[Crow]

I love the way you portray love as something that is almost, bitter sweet.

I truly enjoyed this.

[Ruth]

This has amazing structure, adds imapct!
A beautifully penned poem love!
Love, diagnosed, in a manner that renders the perosn immersed, and the reader! lol
Awesome!
xx

[Crowley]

Wow that flowed...sometimes when you have to use words, some of them get a little wedged in with your foot...not this one, as natural as it could have been. "where ordinary words become riveting" I love that. Great job.

[blbla]

very cool! i like the way youve presented the piece on paper, its shape, it adds a great deal to the words them selves!

[Ladysue]

I love the title to this piece and the ending perfect. A very well written piece with great progression...

[Steve]

This seemed to be difficult to write......very nice words and design. I like this style