Peer Inward (the Koi's Song)

For the Creative Poetry group... had to use the words: humidity, coincidental, indigo, enticement, waves, shards... in a poem about any kind of water.

Enticement of elusive golden flashes,
silvery slivers disappear beneath ripples,
soft waves reflecting rings of indigo skies
out of self-inflicted solitude seduced by
sashaying shards of sunlight: come
near, now listen, no such thing exists
as whole silence, for we will whisper
gliding below the gloam, caroming
within the humidity of this humble haven

Abruptly, the koi's fin-wake, like felt against
blown glass, fleetingly, free-ing-ly audible
to the coincidental, cloying ear contrived
to remove, to rectify the last resolves
of I, who dared at last to pause-- peer inward